Hey Everyone,
I've started working on a song in Fruity Loops, and for those of you interested in Rave/Trance/ect Genres, or anyone for that matter, I'd really like to hear your opinion on what I'm doing so far.

You'll definatly not be able to tell from this rough work.. but I've been told that I have ... sorta my own genre of music. I dunno
It has only just began, but I think I'd like a few suggestions/helpfull critisisms/ COMMENTS! on it.

Here's a link;

Thanks in advance